Fics - commentary?

[hihoplastic]

I'm still deciding if this is (mildly) egotistical or not, but while I'm deliberating I thought I'd go ahead and do it anyway. I see a lot of people who do commentaries and the like for their fics/stories, and it's always intrigued me to see the background process behind the work. And I figured, since we're entering finals (and I obviously need something to distract me from being productive) - why not? So.


If there's anything I've written that doesn't make sense, or you have any questions on, or want some kind of commentary about (why it's written like that, dudewhere'sthegrammer?, etc.) ask away! It'll probably be a good exercise for me, to try to explain where all the crack comes from. ^^


Fics can be found here. Anything's game.

Comments

[kozmicblues.livejournal.com]

OMG **SO HAS NOTHING TO DO AND SO WILL DO THIS BECAUSE OMG CATH!FIC AND LALALALALA TOTALLY TOTALLY GOING TO BE THE INTERVIEWER!**


... ahem, overtime.

[snapplesons.livejournal.com]

Well, I don't really have questions or think that things don't make sense, but I'd love a commentary on either baby!death fic.