HouseRareathon, HouseCuddy: Second Best (4/50)

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FanFiction: HouseRareathon/HouseFic50: HouseCuddy (1/1) - Second Best

( Hurting her was never the point, but he always seemed to make it one )

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You wrote this in the middle of the night, didn't you?

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‘You still love her, don’t you?’ she asked when he woke up. His eyes were still closed but his breathing changed, and the hinges of the bed groaned softly as he sat up and slowly made his way toward her in the dark.

Hinges? The bed has hinges? Sounds interesting... slightly kinky maybe... they're usually made with springs...

He was too busy sorting through personal files, healing mice and coving up mistakes.

I gotta ask, coving or covering up?

‘But…’ he murmured against her lips, and finished the sentence by dragging his tongue along the roof her mouth, smiling against her skin as her arms finally went around his neck and pulled him closer.

Along the roof OF her mouth?

*shakes head* You know I went to bed early last night (midnight)... but at 6:30 this morning... suddenly it was time to be AWAKE. *Sigh*
Sure when I WANT to sleep in... I can't! *sigh*

Re: You wrote this in the middle of the night, didn't you?

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No, actually it took me a long time to write, almost a month. I went over it several times; guess I still missed some stuff. Sorry. I'll go back and fix what I can.