ext_34035 ([identity profile] allibabab.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hihoplastic 2007-02-26 08:21 pm (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful. It all says so much, and you have so many poignant, poetic lines in here, like she wants so many things, she topples with their weight, and my favorite line, because of the way it's structured and phrased, snap (the file hits the desk): you should have stopped with i'm sorry.

Just... lovely. Spectacular job.

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